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To look at your beautiful face once again
Please come back
Do not go
I need the warmth you gave me
I need to look at your beautiful face
Your death haunts me
I am cold here without you
We grew up together
We fought and we laughed
You are part of me now
I can not touch myself
Do not go
I need the warmth you gave me
I need to look at your beautiful face
Your death haunts me
I am cold here without you
We grew up together
We fought and we laughed
You are part of me now
I can not touch myself
Published 31st Jan 2025
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1st Feb 2025 11:04am
Heart-wrenching!
This poem is a beautiful and poignant expression of grief and longing. The language is simple yet powerful, conveying the depth of emotion and the intensity of the loss.
The final line, "I cannot touch myself," is a devastating expression of the speaker's sense of disconnection and numbness, underscoring the idea that a part of them has been irreparably lost.
This poem is a beautiful and poignant expression of grief and longing. The language is simple yet powerful, conveying the depth of emotion and the intensity of the loss.
The final line, "I cannot touch myself," is a devastating expression of the speaker's sense of disconnection and numbness, underscoring the idea that a part of them has been irreparably lost.
1st Feb 2025 2:24pm
