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Midwinter
come lend me
your ears
enter now
dream state beckons
singing ice speaks
vast open tundra
through aquatic totems
we hear cairned carcasses
clairvoyant sun sinks
honey combed tears
bleak slumber
break not this vow
where still life
of bees
began again
https://youtu.be/s6ffD5vCWBk?t=6
copyrights © Rianne 2025
your ears
enter now
dream state beckons
singing ice speaks
vast open tundra
through aquatic totems
we hear cairned carcasses
clairvoyant sun sinks
honey combed tears
bleak slumber
break not this vow
where still life
of bees
began again
https://youtu.be/s6ffD5vCWBk?t=6
copyrights © Rianne 2025
Author's Note
Inspired by the song, in this song you can hear sounds of nature, the so called singing ice sounds. It is not a translation of the lyrics. Its a long piece and you have to really let it sink in and play it loud to hear all the sounds. This is the wisdom of nature speaking!
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Re. Midwinter
31st Jan 2025 12:20pm
Just beautiful! Nature is the best antidote to whatever ails us. The Earth is our Mother.
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1st Feb 2025 6:03pm
Thank you dear Ahavati, indeed so, Nature above all, its where we come from! Greetings love and blessings, Rianne
Re. Midwinter
Beautiful work Rianne .. loved all but that still life of bees began again.. ricochets & reverberates in a humming continuum syncing your visions you draw here.. xx
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Re: Re. Midwinter
1st Feb 2025 6:05pm
Thank you dear Uma, for your lovely words and your continuing support! We ow a lot to the bees! Greetings love and blessings,
Rianne
Rianne
Re. Midwinter
1st Feb 2025 3:01am
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1st Feb 2025 6:06pm
Thank you Damian, much appreciation for you as well!
Greetings love and blessings
Rianne
Greetings love and blessings
Rianne
Re. Midwinter
2nd Feb 2025 9:26am
Re: Re. Midwinter
2nd Feb 2025 9:29am
Hello Jimmy,
Great that you do so! I am a huge fan of winter, there is just something specific about it. Thank you for reading and commenting!
Greetings and blessings
Rianne
Great that you do so! I am a huge fan of winter, there is just something specific about it. Thank you for reading and commenting!
Greetings and blessings
Rianne
Re. Midwinter
7th Feb 2025 4:18pm
Simply amazing, it was the second half that truly captivated me and thought, why can't I write as good as this.....
Astounding write, my girl.
"through aquatic totems
we hear cairned carcasses
clairvoyant sun sinks
honey combed tears
bleak slumber
break not this vow
where still life
of bees"
Astounding write, my girl.
"through aquatic totems
we hear cairned carcasses
clairvoyant sun sinks
honey combed tears
bleak slumber
break not this vow
where still life
of bees"
1
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Re: Re. Midwinter
7th Feb 2025 4:35pm
Thank you kindly Ryan, I appreciate your feedback on this poem.
I wrote it while listening to music so its the music that has given me these words. Hey you just made me aware of your poem Hade, which is an absolute gem. Couldnt write that either, you have your own skilled pen! Greetings and blessings to you and nice to meet you here, Rianne
I wrote it while listening to music so its the music that has given me these words. Hey you just made me aware of your poem Hade, which is an absolute gem. Couldnt write that either, you have your own skilled pen! Greetings and blessings to you and nice to meet you here, Rianne
Re: Re. Midwinter
7th Feb 2025 4:43pm
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Yesterday 10:58am
Likewise Ryan, lovely to converse with a like minded soul!
have a good day, greetings and blessings
Rianne
have a good day, greetings and blessings
Rianne