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Improvise
A guiding light cutting through the dark
Solitude making these years seem long
Fuzzy suggestions are capable of spark
Sometimes truth gets written into song
Always a little fuel remaining in the tank
With production costs continuing to rise
People forced to walk the fucking plank
Death’s certain unless one can improvise
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2025
Solitude making these years seem long
Fuzzy suggestions are capable of spark
Sometimes truth gets written into song
Always a little fuel remaining in the tank
With production costs continuing to rise
People forced to walk the fucking plank
Death’s certain unless one can improvise
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2025
Author's Note
Late night musing. Just thinking out loud basically, sometimes it's necessary. Appreciate you.
- Damian DeadLove
"Faces of liars, faces of glass
Walk on the wire but they won't get past
Hold me darling, don't let go
Save each other from a world of woe."
- Lindsey Buckingham
- Damian DeadLove
"Faces of liars, faces of glass
Walk on the wire but they won't get past
Hold me darling, don't let go
Save each other from a world of woe."
- Lindsey Buckingham
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Re. Improvise
Yesterday 9:02am
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Today 4:25am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Pete. I'm glad you liked the write, my friend. I liked that line as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Improvise
Yesterday 10:30am
Oh so true sire. Well said troubles were all facing. Great piece Damian.
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Today 4:27am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. I'm glad you liked the write, my friend. Ain't that the truth. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Improvise
Yesterday 12:22pm
Nice musings, Damian. There are midterm elections coming up - so it may not be four years of this bullshit.
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Today 4:30am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tams. I'm glad you liked the write, my friend. We can only hope. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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Yesterday 12:32pm
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Today 4:32am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. I'm glad you liked the write, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Improvise
Yesterday 12:35pm
Improvisation into a poetic corpus forever etched into pages we pay forward.
Like a message in a bottle to eternity, after falling from our plank walk.
Like a message in a bottle to eternity, after falling from our plank walk.
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Today 4:34am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, MS. I'm glad you connected with the write, my friend. Words of wisdom. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Improvise
Yesterday 3:22pm
Very succinct and concise. This garners an original and unique observation of morality and principle and puts it into a condensed format of flowing lyricism. It's rather smooth in delivery, too. Great job.
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Today 4:36am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, brother. I'm glad you liked the write, my friend. On point in your analysis. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian