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Phoenix 2
storms rage in these skies
but I'm not scared
no, because I've felt this before
the winds cut me deep like glass
sill I pushed through
I saw friends submerged by the ocean
hit by sorrows relentless waves
still I kept swimming
I watched the fires
like hell rushing towards me
been burnt down to nothing but ashes
somehow I arose
memories of a person I no longer am
yet I still live
but I'm not scared
no, because I've felt this before
the winds cut me deep like glass
sill I pushed through
I saw friends submerged by the ocean
hit by sorrows relentless waves
still I kept swimming
I watched the fires
like hell rushing towards me
been burnt down to nothing but ashes
somehow I arose
memories of a person I no longer am
yet I still live
Published 26th Jan 2025
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26th Jan 2025 1:03pm
Dear DC,
I really liked your use of nature to create this image of rising up and moving forward. The struggle is felt in pushing past the discomfort throughout the piece and coming out the other side made us see we’re not the same but stronger. Well done. H🌷
I really liked your use of nature to create this image of rising up and moving forward. The struggle is felt in pushing past the discomfort throughout the piece and coming out the other side made us see we’re not the same but stronger. Well done. H🌷
26th Jan 2025 2:26pm
27th Jan 2025 3:18pm
