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razor oh razor
Oh razor oh razor so shiny and bright.
Will you be my friend tonight?
Holding you against me so close
Your the one I love the most
oh razor oh razor blood soaked and red
another day I truley dread
My skin craves for your touch
When your gone I miss you so much.
Oh razor oh razor I cant take much more.
my heart is broken
Tattered
Deformed.
this life really doesn't matter........... so please.
Oh razor oh razorso shiny so bright......will you take my life tonight?
Will you be my friend tonight?
Holding you against me so close
Your the one I love the most
oh razor oh razor blood soaked and red
another day I truley dread
My skin craves for your touch
When your gone I miss you so much.
Oh razor oh razor I cant take much more.
my heart is broken
Tattered
Deformed.
this life really doesn't matter........... so please.
Oh razor oh razorso shiny so bright......will you take my life tonight?
Published 24th May 2012
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24th May 2012 3:00pm
This is rather sad, but I really liked it a lot; the imagery drew me in and the irony of this poem made it stick with me.
25th May 2012 00:56am
25th May 2012 3:47pm
