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~the syneresis moon
his eyes are in a fixated
long stare at mine..
in a unbearably delicate
holding of so much
tears and words
he wants to
cry out
& say..
yet he’s here
in a determined
stagnant stare
shines his
the ever iron clad
pitch black coal
eyes.. only that
now the syneresing
irises are in a separating…
… as pulpy famine greys
with the inner broken
yet the somehow running
& holding patterns
of a crinkly petallous
sepia blooms..
fading out
to a distant
doom
(could feel.. shaking
within them.. are the rough
uproarious stormy high
tides of a full moon
‘pournami’ bloom. a blemished
moon though.. in greyey
pulpy gelling imperfect spheres
scattering on it’s jagged edges
in a weeping syneresis
..the irises retrograde
as if a weakened fallout
with the background whites
innumerably clotted in
tiny beady angered reds
in an imminent mishap
of an imploding mode..)
these irradiating rays
from his mooning eyes..
a held in strength amidst all
yet with an asking warmth
of a simple presence of me
of his loved ones .. near him
in an unsaid low amplitudes
of deep trilling lamentable
wavelengths.. shakes one
in even more weakening
spells than him..
only thing i do now..
.. just to be there for him..
tightly hold his hands
with mine in such
exuding & infusing
confidence..
that will pave way
to feel & answer
all his unsaid
sayings that’s
saddeningly, bit maddeningly
& confoundingly .. mixed
and voluminous..
yet that profound strength
i feel in him .. that fills me
with even more intensities
of courage in me .. to love
to do .. to be..
what when how etc etc etc
.. to do to be.. all those
n-surrounding questions
feels simplifying & clarifying
all in itself .. in a sudden
immense gained clairvoyance
..from him .. his mooning eyes
that shines
a luminous One sun
now
Published 24th Jan 2025
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24th Jan 2025 2:47pm
Hello Uma,
This is a heartfelt moving touching write, your artistic gift allows you to weave in just about anything into poetry. While reading I started to see a face and it was a changing face like a withering face. The electro magnetic glow that came from this write was like the glow of etherical love. I can only say that this poem is an experience and reading it is listening from the heart. Lots of love, strength to you in your caring, greetings and blessings
Riannex
Dear Rianne.. missed you n du n all the wondrous reads in here for few days.. feels breathing in du in your reads n words you reflect .. in du’s lovely syncing wise adored loved poets n friend in here.. your reflection so minute n detailing is an experience in itself .. shows your deep soul n beauty dear Rianne .. sorry fir not reading n not experiencing yours n my adoreds poetry in here.. will catch up sure xx
24th Jan 2025 3:42pm
When you give love, the love comes back to you. Feel the warmth & honesty in the poem. Well said Uma. XOXO
24th Jan 2025 3:52pm
Keith.. your reads n feelings you sync in each comment.. uplifts the soul in love pure love .. you know my adored loved one xx
24th Jan 2025 9:58pm
I love how this encapsulated the essence of "just being" with someone. Not offering anything, not directing anything, not trying to fix anything, but just being there for someone in their time of need, allowing them to experience whatever emotions without judgement, without apathy, without leaving. That is the greatest form of love - the giving of self for another's purpose.
25th Jan 2025 2:36am
25th Jan 2025 8:08am
Dear U,
I really enjoyed this piece. Those precious moments of just being are rare and having that one person just letting them happen even rarer. Lovely write. H🌷
I really enjoyed this piece. Those precious moments of just being are rare and having that one person just letting them happen even rarer. Lovely write. H🌷
