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Re. Keep trying until you get it right
17th Jan 2025 9:32pm
No! Nothing is so bad to end it. Shift gears. Do nothing you did yesterday! Stay away from home and too much thought. Go to church or a karaoke bar - something out of norm. Buy a fucking bag of oranges and hand them out for free. Smile at people and say I. Tell them you are depressed and trying to cheer yourself. Please!
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Re: Re. Keep trying until you get it right
17th Jan 2025 9:35pm
HAHA! CHURCH! That would make me off myself. I smile at you but you never smile back
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18th Jan 2025 9:27am
Re. Keep trying until you get it right
17th Jan 2025 9:40pm
Re: Re. Keep trying until you get it right
17th Jan 2025 9:41pm
Most of my writes are satirical. You should know the way my writings flow. It's mostly fiction. 666
Re: Re. Keep trying until you get it right
17th Jan 2025 9:51pm
Unfortunately, most of mine are factual based. Names changed and minor details. Facts condensed into shorter less drawn out time frames. No one wants to read that something happened and something else 6 weeks later and then a year after that - so a "story or poem" takes place in minutes or maximum a day. A couple are based on other people. I usually state it.
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Re: Re. Keep trying until you get it right
17th Jan 2025 9:58pm
your writings are detailed and in your face. Real or not, you're a strong writer.
Re. Keep trying until you get it right
17th Jan 2025 9:49pm
hello dearest Keith stay with us awhile we need you... if you are depressed reach out what is your top ten?
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Re: Re. Keep trying until you get it right
17th Jan 2025 9:51pm
Re. Keep trying until you get it right
18th Jan 2025 1:22am
Re: Re. Keep trying until you get it right
18th Jan 2025 11:56am
I understand what you mean. Appreciate you my friend. Don't go anywhere.xo
Re. Keep trying until you get it right
18th Jan 2025 3:42am
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18th Jan 2025 11:57am