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Epitaph-/ ode to Ran
when these shores
hearse sea horses
curved flaked foam
far faint breezes are at play
while winterly ghosts
sing sea gulled
we the walking sands
will remember them
finding thornless russets
where wild anemones arose
upon opening tides
we the waves
will soothe ears
with tears of a tar
embodied strumming lyres
where I behold no one
myself alone
beheld in vastness
sae sea she!
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hearse sea horses
curved flaked foam
far faint breezes are at play
while winterly ghosts
sing sea gulled
we the walking sands
will remember them
finding thornless russets
where wild anemones arose
upon opening tides
we the waves
will soothe ears
with tears of a tar
embodied strumming lyres
where I behold no one
myself alone
beheld in vastness
sae sea she!
copyrights © owned by Rianne 2024
all rights reserved
Published 14th Jan 2025
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wasnt going to post but cest la vie, a change in plans so peeking back into DU.
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14th Jan 2025 9:33am
A hauntingly beautiful poem that weaves together imagery of the sea, nature, and memory, evoking a sense of melancholy and solitude.
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14th Jan 2025 9:50am
Hello,
Thank you for the kind words on this piece, I guess you summed up some themes quite well! Much appreciated,
Rianne
Thank you for the kind words on this piece, I guess you summed up some themes quite well! Much appreciated,
Rianne
14th Jan 2025 1:27pm
I just read a note from someone this morning that said all a Scorpio needs is water. I think this poem has encapsulated this perfectly.
when these shores
hearse sea horses
The alliteration is that is just lovely.
when these shores
hearse sea horses
The alliteration is that is just lovely.
14th Jan 2025 2:02pm
Thank you dear Ahavati, glad you enjoyed this poem. Although I am an earth sign I have always loved and felt connected to the waters.
As you know Orion was supposed to also be able to walk on water.
Be it real waters or cosmic waters. Always lovely to see you stop by, have a nice day!
Rianne
As you know Orion was supposed to also be able to walk on water.
Be it real waters or cosmic waters. Always lovely to see you stop by, have a nice day!
Rianne
14th Jan 2025 7:51pm
Beautifully penned, Rianne. Into the list it belongs. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
14th Jan 2025 9:16pm
Thank you Damian for the list add, glad you enjoyed this one.
Always great to see you visit, greetings
Rianne
Always great to see you visit, greetings
Rianne
