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Great Day

She had a great day
She had a great day
She didn’t have to stay

My sister has a black spot
The thing we wish we ain’t got
Hers is in her head
Ours is what we truly dread

She had a great day
Told her she didn’t have to stay

She had a great day
She didn’t have to stay

The dread of our own span
And she can’t stand strong
It was her party day and
She can’t  play…
Even on her Day…Her own Day

She had a great day
Told her she didn’t have to stay

She had a really great day
She didn’t have to stay

She is everything to our family
She is lil Pat’s godmom…
The block parties would ring…all..night…long
She got me my 1st job and my 2nd one to…
 Belong

She had a great day
They told her..she didn’t have to stay

She had a real great day
Told her not to stay

She had a really Great Day
She had a really great day

Told her not stay and
The family is waiting

Told her not to stay  and
The family is waiting

Told her not to stay
And the family’s…..Waiting
Written by oldmanG
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Author's Note
To my sister Eileen ❤️
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