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Mr. Fever
My moods change with the weather.
The more chaotic, the better.
I'm a storm system around the treasure.
A lonely island sinking; getting wetter.
Maybe soon the sun will break me.
All it's glory might just shake me.
Maybe God will finally date me.
He's the devil that always hates me.
I'm just spinning with the clouds.
My moods rumbling in and out.
Ill destroy everything i doubt.
It's best you find a safer route.
The more chaotic, the better.
I'm a storm system around the treasure.
A lonely island sinking; getting wetter.
Maybe soon the sun will break me.
All it's glory might just shake me.
Maybe God will finally date me.
He's the devil that always hates me.
I'm just spinning with the clouds.
My moods rumbling in and out.
Ill destroy everything i doubt.
It's best you find a safer route.
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Re. Mr. Fever
10th Jan 2025 6:43am
I'm just enquiring... what is the treasure you have got yourself wrapped around? 😉
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10th Jan 2025 7:02am
Re. Mr. Fever
10th Jan 2025 7:26am
Bit greedy.....being peaceful is more than enough....even that is impermanent.
See you down the mall. 😜
See you down the mall. 😜
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10th Jan 2025 7:35am
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Re. Mr. Fever
10th Jan 2025 8:21am
I love the this poem and all it’s worth
For thoughts that give our lives rebirth
For thoughts that give our lives rebirth
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Re. Mr. Fever
Heavy, honest & raw. Great ASD! Lucifer will date you. No doubt! He's waiting right now to come in your back door.
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10th Jan 2025 10:45am
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10th Jan 2025 10:55am
Re: Re. Mr. Fever
10th Jan 2025 10:57am
True. Maybe there's one at the thrift store in town. I'll look today for you.
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10th Jan 2025 4:48pm