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Close Encounters
In my heart
and in my mind
I was slowly starting to forget
Nothing could ever have prepared me
for this
When I saw you
on that packed street
the buildings,cars and people disappeared
When we embraced
I felt my lungs collapse
Shortly that moment elapsed
I found myself on my own again
Asking myself questions
I should have asked you
The gray clouds turned into embers
as you and your friend
got swallowed by the setting sun
This might be the last time
I ever see you
It always feels that way
and in my mind
I was slowly starting to forget
Nothing could ever have prepared me
for this
When I saw you
on that packed street
the buildings,cars and people disappeared
When we embraced
I felt my lungs collapse
Shortly that moment elapsed
I found myself on my own again
Asking myself questions
I should have asked you
The gray clouds turned into embers
as you and your friend
got swallowed by the setting sun
This might be the last time
I ever see you
It always feels that way
Published 23rd May 2012
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21st Jun 2012 7:22am
Im guessing it's about meeting a loved one after so long then them leaving you. I think it's good but can use more interpretation.
21st Jun 2012 5:08pm
thank you Nubian.I actually accidentally bumped into a girl I liked and felt really awkward about seeing her again after making a fool of myself to her.It's all about unrequited feelings and trying to deal with them I decided to write this.Thank you for checking it out
22nd Jun 2012 5:22am
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