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Or Let Me Die
hold me
let me know you love me
inspire me
my vision gets blurry
trust me
because I need validation
talk with me
I just want to be heard
hurt me
but just make sure you also heal me
leave me
if I'm truly that hopeless
do this...
or just let me die
help me lift this weight
the pressure gets heavy
let me know it's ok to walk away
and let me know I can return
I've failed
tell me it's not forever
I've grown tired
but I can't sleep
tell me what it is I need to do
then finally lay me down
do this...
or just let me die
please, don't let me give up
I still want to hope
show me there's still good in people
help me see
there's still good in me
I lack direction
still I keep walking
bloody feet and all
I've accomplished a lot
I'm just not sure if I care
show me how to care
let me know you love me
inspire me
my vision gets blurry
trust me
because I need validation
talk with me
I just want to be heard
hurt me
but just make sure you also heal me
leave me
if I'm truly that hopeless
do this...
or just let me die
help me lift this weight
the pressure gets heavy
let me know it's ok to walk away
and let me know I can return
I've failed
tell me it's not forever
I've grown tired
but I can't sleep
tell me what it is I need to do
then finally lay me down
do this...
or just let me die
please, don't let me give up
I still want to hope
show me there's still good in people
help me see
there's still good in me
I lack direction
still I keep walking
bloody feet and all
I've accomplished a lot
I'm just not sure if I care
show me how to care
Published 8th Jan 2025
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8th Jan 2025 9:20am
This message is deepness at it's finest moments of a beautiful confession of the soul and heart and mind nicely done 👍👍✅ yet there is still hope for sure we have to continue to be strong because for every dark night there will come a beautiful day for tomorrow 💪👍🙏
8th Jan 2025 11:58pm
I find this deeply touching. I've been in that place before. Keep walking... I hope beauty finds you soon. 🙏
Thank you for sharing this.
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Thank you for sharing this.
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