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His Fever Soothes My Forever
Tormented souls twist each other
Until flesh reads like braille
Each unseen bruise
Reading like perfection
Until flesh reads like braille
Each unseen bruise
Reading like perfection
Author's Note
Copyright @ Her 2025. All rights reserved.
This poem is what takes place BEFORE a physical relationship.
It’s my thought, that long before the relationship, we have unhealed emotions and desires that connect with the other person and come to fruition once the relationship commences.
Like finds like, like understands and accepts like, like gives themselves unconditionally to like because they have found themselves reflected in the other person - what they have been searching for in order to heal.
To me, the bruises from BDSM play are sexy reminders, so when like finds like in this situation, those bruises are also perfection, like a weary soul finding a resting place.
I think BDSM is beautiful in this sense because it provides the perfect space for all that acceptance to happen.
This poem is what takes place BEFORE a physical relationship.
It’s my thought, that long before the relationship, we have unhealed emotions and desires that connect with the other person and come to fruition once the relationship commences.
Like finds like, like understands and accepts like, like gives themselves unconditionally to like because they have found themselves reflected in the other person - what they have been searching for in order to heal.
To me, the bruises from BDSM play are sexy reminders, so when like finds like in this situation, those bruises are also perfection, like a weary soul finding a resting place.
I think BDSM is beautiful in this sense because it provides the perfect space for all that acceptance to happen.
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Re. His Fever Soothes My Forever
6th Jan 2025 11:31am
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6th Jan 2025 11:35am
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6th Jan 2025 11:58am
Re. His Fever Soothes My Forever
6th Jan 2025 12:06pm
Intellectually I understand BDSM but I cant quite grasp the psychological and emotional aspects.
Maybe thats the whole point.
Oh to be a fly on a dungeon wall...lol
Maybe thats the whole point.
Oh to be a fly on a dungeon wall...lol
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6th Jan 2025 12:10pm
Honestly, it was difficult for me at first also.
It takes learning about myself and trusting myself, trusting the other person, which is why submission is difficult for me and currently, I'm a switch, more dominant than submissive, like we discussed.
It takes learning about myself and trusting myself, trusting the other person, which is why submission is difficult for me and currently, I'm a switch, more dominant than submissive, like we discussed.
Re. His Fever Soothes My Forever
6th Jan 2025 12:20pm
Amen to all of this, both your poem and the author's note.
"Like finds like, like understands and accepts like" > exactly that.
There's something so healing in finding someone who reads you like braille 💕
"Like finds like, like understands and accepts like" > exactly that.
There's something so healing in finding someone who reads you like braille 💕
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Re: Re. His Fever Soothes My Forever
6th Jan 2025 12:21pm
There sure is.
Thanks, D
I'd heart you, but I'm on my laptop this morning, so...sending hugs!
Thanks, D
I'd heart you, but I'm on my laptop this morning, so...sending hugs!
Re. His Fever Soothes My Forever
6th Jan 2025 12:20pm
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6th Jan 2025 12:22pm
Thanks, girl
I can't send you my heart this morning (on my laptop), so wrapping you in a huge hug!
I can't send you my heart this morning (on my laptop), so wrapping you in a huge hug!
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6th Jan 2025 12:24pm
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Re. His Fever Soothes My Forever
6th Jan 2025 6:31pm
To my way of thinking, the bruises will also act as a souvenir until the next time... especially if the next time is far away. When I feel lonely, I will stroke them. 😊
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Re. His Fever Soothes My Forever
6th Jan 2025 9:42pm
Oh girl, this is...& so much more. When that connection fits, this is Shelter from life's storms.
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