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I’m Not Alright
Mmm, mmm
We go round and round
Always making too much about
The things we know too much about
I want things the way they used to be
When it was just you and me
And life wasn’t so crazy
I’m tired
Just talk to me
I can’t believe
You stood there like that
Looking at me like that
Like I should know
What you meant
I’m not alright
I don’t want to fight
With you
Mmm, mmm, hmm
Mmm, mmm, mmm
Why do we keep doing this?
We should have more to do than this
What happened to us?
I’m starting to lose trust
Can we go back to us?
I’m tired
Please talk to me
I’m not alright
I don’t want to fight
With you
Mmm, hmm
We go round and round
Always making too much about
The things we know too much about
(too much about)
(Mmm, hmm)
I want things the way they used to be
When it was just you and me
And life wasn’t so crazy
Can’t you see
I’m tired
Just hold me
I’m not alright
I don’t want to fight
With you
With you
Mmm, mmm, mmm, mmm, mmm
Can we go back
To who we used to be please?
Mmmmm, hmmm, yeah, yeah
Yeah
I’m not alright
I don’t want to fight with you
With you
Mmm, mmm, mmm
Can we go back
To who we used to be please?
Mmm, mmm
Can we go back
To who we use to be please?
Mmm, mmm, yeah, yeah
We go round and round
Always making too much about
The things we know too much about
I want things the way they used to be
When it was just you and me
And life wasn’t so crazy
I’m tired
Just talk to me
I can’t believe
You stood there like that
Looking at me like that
Like I should know
What you meant
I’m not alright
I don’t want to fight
With you
Mmm, mmm, hmm
Mmm, mmm, mmm
Why do we keep doing this?
We should have more to do than this
What happened to us?
I’m starting to lose trust
Can we go back to us?
I’m tired
Please talk to me
I’m not alright
I don’t want to fight
With you
Mmm, hmm
We go round and round
Always making too much about
The things we know too much about
(too much about)
(Mmm, hmm)
I want things the way they used to be
When it was just you and me
And life wasn’t so crazy
Can’t you see
I’m tired
Just hold me
I’m not alright
I don’t want to fight
With you
With you
Mmm, mmm, mmm, mmm, mmm
Can we go back
To who we used to be please?
Mmmmm, hmmm, yeah, yeah
Yeah
I’m not alright
I don’t want to fight with you
With you
Mmm, mmm, mmm
Can we go back
To who we used to be please?
Mmm, mmm
Can we go back
To who we use to be please?
Mmm, mmm, yeah, yeah
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Re. I’m Not Alright
You inspire me to write ✍️ my own thoughts on this subject that matters in so many ways ✍️ Sometimes we will agree to disagree with one another but yet that's why it's called love yet we still need that kind of mental understanding to the point I need you as much you need me to hold everything together for I'm not alright and neither are you willing to help us navigate through the process of being able to share our thoughts and insight and spiritual growth of maturity in understanding each other woman to man and man to woman to man that's why we need the most powerful element of understanding 🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
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2nd Jan 2025 4:57pm
I love that this song inspired you, my friend 💕
Those are wise words you have there….
Those are wise words you have there….
Re: Re. I’m Not Alright
2nd Jan 2025 8:24pm
Thanks for the inspiration I needed that for I had a conversation with someone that day and your strength gave me the courage to speak to them as a dear friend as they are going through a rough time in there own personal relationship 😔🙏🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
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Re. I’m Not Alright
2nd Jan 2025 10:01am
Dear M,
The story within this write is so real and well defined. Worked as song lyrics gave it such a cool twist. You have a great sense of meter and rhythm. I see you continue your loving generosity in writing this for a friend, excellent piece. H🌷
The story within this write is so real and well defined. Worked as song lyrics gave it such a cool twist. You have a great sense of meter and rhythm. I see you continue your loving generosity in writing this for a friend, excellent piece. H🌷
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2nd Jan 2025 4:44pm
It's funny how a major argument passes and nothing changes but a little alters the entire dynamic of a relationship. Amazing write.
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2nd Jan 2025 5:00pm
Thank you so much, TW
You are absolutely correct. Relationships are tricky like that.
You are absolutely correct. Relationships are tricky like that.
Re. I’m Not Alright
2nd Jan 2025 5:19pm
Let's make magic today and COME back to it tomorrow! Hugs and love, Oral
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Re. I’m Not Alright
4th Jan 2025 3:41pm
I've been here. There's no going back once on that road. Gotta stop & do maintenance before you can move forward. It's so wearing. Beautifully written, girl
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5th Jan 2025 5:55am
Thanks, girl
This has always been the point of no going back for me, I just couldn’t see it then. I’m glad I know myself better now.
This has always been the point of no going back for me, I just couldn’t see it then. I’m glad I know myself better now.