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when i submitted my darkness in his radiant light
i was
smelling
like an angel
when i
touched
his
talented tongue
pleasant lips
and
gorgeous cock...
when
i kissed
the night
and tasted
his
hanging moon
through
my personal hell
that was filled
with sparkling wine...
smelling
like an angel
when i
touched
his
talented tongue
pleasant lips
and
gorgeous cock...
when
i kissed
the night
and tasted
his
hanging moon
through
my personal hell
that was filled
with sparkling wine...
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Re. when i submitted my darkness in his radiant light
29th Dec 2024 4:31pm
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Re. when i submitted my darkness in his radiant light
29th Dec 2024 8:42pm
Wild times
You sure know how to tell a story of temptation and fulfillment…
BIG
You sure know how to tell a story of temptation and fulfillment…
BIG
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29th Dec 2024 11:59pm
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31st Dec 2024 1:32am
aaah that words.. " long long nights
night long long... "
made me
horny in the early morning...
night long long... "
made me
horny in the early morning...
Re. when i submitted my darkness in his radiant light
30th Dec 2024 4:35am
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Re. when i submitted my darkness in his radiant light
30th Dec 2024 11:35am
You employed the senses quite favorably with that submission. Great opening! ;)
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30th Dec 2024 11:46am
Re. when i submitted my darkness in his radiant light
Anonymous
30th Dec 2024 6:32pm
What a nice cup of steaming hot metaphors.
Very nice
Very nice
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Re. when i submitted my darkness in his radiant light
6th Jan 2025 4:28pm
I feel there’s a deeper message (no pun intended haha) to this piece. I like it hehe 😉
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Re: Re. when i submitted my darkness in his radiant light
6th Jan 2025 4:54pm
yaay Daniel you must know ... After all you're my buoooy ha ha... thank you... ;)