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What A Way To Ring In The New Year
On the first day of
January, Barbara
woke and found herself
naked before Peter stepped
in and she smiled at the guy.
January, Barbara
woke and found herself
naked before Peter stepped
in and she smiled at the guy.
Published 28th Dec 2024
Author's Note
The title of this tanka poem happens to be what one half of a couple says to the other half on New Years Day.
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28th Dec 2024 7:03am
Looks like the ringing in could also involve wringing, from her glowing skin.
28th Dec 2024 1:44pm
