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~some night of a traversing highway chaos
the sweltering december hotness sun
consumes gritty astringent skinnish salts
in enormous gulping hunger of a famine
vacuuming emptiness, a fuming depression
of a puckering in sizzling hot desert, rises in
a rotting stench of bled out moulted maroons
scattered as a modern streaked out flash art
sprinkled with the sweaty deltaic tidal waves
in craving wide open rafflesia blooms in scents
of a pickled inner vascular.. severed as tidbits
..screams of an unquenchable insane violence
in firing passion burns to the core .. mere ashy
grounds of a velvety greyness expanse now I am
..drenching in the sudden moody darkness switch
of your predaciously sprawling mind.. in a tricky
trickling drizzly twilights.. consuming terracotta
burns of my died eyelids, exorcises migraines
of an overcooked brittle skull.. you how now
rebirth this ashy nothingness to a shaping hippy
chunk.. tirelessly holding you in and out infinite
.. in Fahrenheits unknown to this spewing magma
universe.. what just remains .. are the versing lips
in sacred husky chants of .. you you and just you
Published 27th Dec 2024
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27th Dec 2024 3:16pm
A night drive in the rain is intense. Your poem captures the beauty and magic of a night in love. Hot, sensual, you!! Great poem Uma.
27th Dec 2024 5:56pm
Dear Uma,
The soaring enchantment of the words almost hypnotising the reader. I know it is about weather but it almost felt like I was witnessing comet rains. Chaos is alchemy, one of the first elements of hermetic magic. Your pen a whirlwind!
Bright blessings
Rianne
28th Dec 2024 5:24am
Beautifully written, Uma. A very intense read, nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
29th Dec 2024 12:50pm
