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PAIR EMBRACING (RHYMING CAPTION TO EGON SCHIELE PAINTING)
Pair embracing
after chasing
each other round
the sun parched ground.
Clothes forsaking
for love-making,
consummating
their rare outing.
Their bodies bare,
her untied hair
from head pools round
upon the ground.
The crumpling sheet
that was their seat
for picnicking
forms their bedding.
Her hair-lined groove
invites his move
to plunge within,
deeper than skin.
after chasing
each other round
the sun parched ground.
Clothes forsaking
for love-making,
consummating
their rare outing.
Their bodies bare,
her untied hair
from head pools round
upon the ground.
The crumpling sheet
that was their seat
for picnicking
forms their bedding.
Her hair-lined groove
invites his move
to plunge within,
deeper than skin.
Published 23rd Dec 2024
| Edited 26th Dec 2024
Author's Note
The poem grew out of the title Schiele gave his painting of 1917 (from wikipedia).
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9th Jan 2025 6:39pm
Oh, yes, my wise poet. I love the way you blend emotions, rapture, passion, and yes, a wisp of lust, what a caressing soothing storm.
You capture beauty of the human form so well, then you take the time to compose the emotions, feelings behind your poetic ink spills, totally living it.
Happy New Year if I have not wished that upon your presence.
Love and Hugs, always,
SKC🖤
You capture beauty of the human form so well, then you take the time to compose the emotions, feelings behind your poetic ink spills, totally living it.
Happy New Year if I have not wished that upon your presence.
Love and Hugs, always,
SKC🖤
9th Jan 2025 7:24pm
20th Jan 2025 9:35pm
I loved your poem. It spoke volumes of a deep sensual erotica. Keep writing. Good work.
