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The closure
There was still a part of me that felt connected,
but connected to what I thought, I am unsure at this time…
Perhaps my dysfunctional way of thinking?
or the power of attraction? Or both
Well whatever is was I found myself in new skin,
for the first time in like forever I spoke
without thinking about the consequences
of my own words, and let it rip, how I really feel
“I am woman hear me roar!” was my intent
After our “meeting, over lunch,” I came home alone
I opened the door to my apartment and looked around.
Immediately, I notice how immaculately clean my apartment looked which simultaneous put a grin on my face
I then notice the 7.5” Christmas tree sitting in front of my balcony windows all lit up. I sat down on my couch lit a smoke and began watching the news.
but connected to what I thought, I am unsure at this time…
Perhaps my dysfunctional way of thinking?
or the power of attraction? Or both
Well whatever is was I found myself in new skin,
for the first time in like forever I spoke
without thinking about the consequences
of my own words, and let it rip, how I really feel
“I am woman hear me roar!” was my intent
After our “meeting, over lunch,” I came home alone
I opened the door to my apartment and looked around.
Immediately, I notice how immaculately clean my apartment looked which simultaneous put a grin on my face
I then notice the 7.5” Christmas tree sitting in front of my balcony windows all lit up. I sat down on my couch lit a smoke and began watching the news.
Published 21st Dec 2024
| Edited 17th Jan 2025
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22nd Dec 2024 10:29am
Just trying to embrace my choices. I made a huge change in my life recently. And no I haven’t been out for a ride in a minute lol Although I will be going to Salem this Halloween coming☺️
It’s always a pleasure to see you on my page, my dear sister.
Love Jackie
Your sister from America
Jackie ❤️
It’s always a pleasure to see you on my page, my dear sister.
Love Jackie
Your sister from America
Jackie ❤️
23rd Dec 2024 2:55am
This read gives off an ambience of cool confidence.
And that tree sounds pretty sweet:)
And that tree sounds pretty sweet:)
24th Dec 2024 6:21pm
Merry Christmas MS❤️ yeah you know, sometimes you just reach a point in life when you have to make the tough decisions and then you’re over it.
Hugs MS ❤️
Jackie
Hugs MS ❤️
Jackie
27th Feb 2025 2:05am
This is one of your best, my friend. I could feel this deep down in my marrow. Your words spoke to my heart and this is mesmerizing. It speaks to the sad shadow of humanity now, but with the heartfelt touch of the personal experience of your "meeting over lunch". You tied the themes here together brilliantly and I am so glad I read you tonight. Your poem here is a present that I am better for having unwrapped.
Love from your brother, always,
John
Love from your brother, always,
John
27th Feb 2025 2:09am
You always have such beautiful things to say to me and I must tell you, you are what the doctor ordered. I’m so grateful for you. I love you, brother.
Your sister Jackie ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Your sister Jackie ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
