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Good Night Thursday!
I'm going to my bed
I am tired of this day
I am tired of people talking at me
I am tired.
I want to lay my head down on this pillow
On the soft sheets
Close my eyes
Tell the world to go fuck off
or have a dream that I'm being fucked off
Why not?
If reality is not giving me
What it claimed I would have
Here is a middle finger
This is what I'm saying about that
I think its past my time
I need to go to bed
Those who know
Know.
Goodnight my friends.
I am tired of this day
I am tired of people talking at me
I am tired.
I want to lay my head down on this pillow
On the soft sheets
Close my eyes
Tell the world to go fuck off
or have a dream that I'm being fucked off
Why not?
If reality is not giving me
What it claimed I would have
Here is a middle finger
This is what I'm saying about that
I think its past my time
I need to go to bed
Those who know
Know.
Goodnight my friends.
Author's Note
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Re. Good Night Thursday!
20th Dec 2024 4:14am
Clever write, Fia. Spitting fire and keeping it real, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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Re. Good Night Thursday!
20th Dec 2024 10:33am
YES!! "Tell the world to fuck off" Always! Great write. Love the no nonsense approach.
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Re. Good Night Thursday!
20th Dec 2024 10:14pm
May I wake you in the morning with traveling kisses nose to toes? (just dreaming) Hugs and love, O
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