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More Than Likely
Always be careful when wishing for something
Everything appears different as it becomes real
Beware of who offers access to that brass ring
More than likely it’ll end up being a horrible deal
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
Everything appears different as it becomes real
Beware of who offers access to that brass ring
More than likely it’ll end up being a horrible deal
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
Author's Note
Late night musing. If it looks to good to be true.. Get the fuck out of there! Appreciate you.
- Damian DeadLove
" You're just a picture
You're an image caught in time
We're a lie.. You and I
We're words without a rhyme."
- Ronnie James Dio
- Damian DeadLove
" You're just a picture
You're an image caught in time
We're a lie.. You and I
We're words without a rhyme."
- Ronnie James Dio
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Re. More Than Likely
14th Dec 2024 8:18am
That brass ring might turn into a collar.
This is some serious wizdom you put down here, Damian
Much respect
Naaj
This is some serious wizdom you put down here, Damian
Much respect
Naaj
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Re: Re. More Than Likely
15th Dec 2024 4:50am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Naaj. Means a lot to me, brother. Much respect. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. More Than Likely
14th Dec 2024 10:13am
true.. all that glitters are not gold , or brass for that sake.. . nothing can be picture perfect, imperfections make it organic & deeply beautiful, & of course .. it’s the truth. nice warning of a musing Damian dear Poet .. light love xx
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Re: Re. More Than Likely
15th Dec 2024 4:52am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Uma. I'm glad you connected with the write. I enjoyed your commentary. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. More Than Likely
14th Dec 2024 10:31am
I never wish for anything and I was never able to catch that brass ring as a kid. This was a well thought out piece. Nicely executed!
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Re: Re. More Than Likely
15th Dec 2024 4:55am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. I wasn't able to catch it either, knowing what I know now, not sure I ever wanted it. It comes with a price. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. More Than Likely
14th Dec 2024 11:14am
Re: Re. More Than Likely
15th Dec 2024 4:56am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Pete. Glad you connected with the write. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. More Than Likely
14th Dec 2024 11:52am
So true, we're tricked into believing something is better or more valuable than it is. There's some clever agendas behind it - and algorithms too, I think. Brilliant piece, my friend, I appreciate you.
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Re: Re. More Than Likely
15th Dec 2024 4:58am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Duende. You speaking truth as well, my friend. Always enjoy your commentary. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. More Than Likely
14th Dec 2024 2:17pm
Too good to be true isn't ever real, is it? Illusion masters with their brass rings. Wishes are all fine & dandy but action gets more lasting results. Another thought provoker...
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Re: Re. More Than Likely
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. Honored to make RL. Couldn't agree with you more, very true indeed. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. More Than Likely
16th Dec 2024 3:04am
Re: Re. More Than Likely
16th Dec 2024 3:32am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. Honored to make your RL. Absolutely, my friend. Caution is key. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian