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Supermarket Sweep
Never ending aisles
Oh grocery store
Two for one offers
Feed me it all
Baskets in bloom
Trollies a glee
Shopping list frenzy
Food spending spree
Shelf upon shelf
Line after line
Screaming bored children
Pass me the wine
Decision, decision
No thrill, top brand
Decision, collision
Octopus hand
Delivery option
Armchair, online
Shopping unpacked
Where is that wine?
Oh grocery store
Two for one offers
Feed me it all
Baskets in bloom
Trollies a glee
Shopping list frenzy
Food spending spree
Shelf upon shelf
Line after line
Screaming bored children
Pass me the wine
Decision, decision
No thrill, top brand
Decision, collision
Octopus hand
Delivery option
Armchair, online
Shopping unpacked
Where is that wine?
Published 13th Dec 2024
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13th Dec 2024 10:15am
Dear P,
Yes, where is that wine? I enjoyed the light hearted-ness of this poem. And now I’m hungry. Where’s the cheese to go with this wine?? 😊
H🌷
Yes, where is that wine? I enjoyed the light hearted-ness of this poem. And now I’m hungry. Where’s the cheese to go with this wine?? 😊
H🌷
13th Dec 2024 10:34am
Hi Honoria, haha Thank You and the cheese will be found down the dairy aisle 🙃♥️
13th Dec 2024 10:48am
13th Dec 2024 11:20am
13th Dec 2024 11:48am
They know how to seduce us, right. The supermarkets, or better said: the people behind it.
Choices, choices, choices - buy, buy, buy. Great piece, Pete, and so very accurate.
Choices, choices, choices - buy, buy, buy. Great piece, Pete, and so very accurate.
13th Dec 2024 12:26pm
13th Dec 2024 2:00pm
good morning Pete I love octupus hands is that in referrence to all the women? in any case that was clever ❤️
13th Dec 2024 2:21pm
13th Dec 2024 10:00pm
My sister does the online grocery thing. I prefer to see all the options & compare. I'm a nerd like that. 😂 I could do without the screaming kids though.
13th Dec 2024 10:32pm
You're like my Sister who does that lol whilst I'm the online one, our Asda which is your Walmart, you can either tick substitutions on or off and I used to forget to turn them off, anyways ordered a family steak pie, they didn't have any after I placed my order and sent me a 4pk of dog food, I don't even have a dog 🤣❤️
14th Dec 2024 4:46am
Brilliantly written, Pete. You turned shopping into a fantastic write. Like this a lot my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
14th Dec 2024 11:15am
15th Dec 2024 9:55pm
Great! Love the way so much abundance soon gives way to dissatisfaction and frustration.
15th Dec 2024 10:14pm
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