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IT Stays On
Morning grey
Is gonna be the day
When it all comes back to you
Some how
You've realised
What you're gotta do
You now don't believe
In Anything
That is said to you
Anymore
You gotta leave
You've gotta clean your head
Find your own
Polnt of view
IF you stay
Your gonna Pay
In way's you can't Conceive
THEY will say
Anything
For you
to stay
But the leash stays on
Until
your in your grave
But lately
I found the one that saves me
I found the one that explains me
And after all
This time
Passing by
IT was on my wall
Is gonna be the day
When it all comes back to you
Some how
You've realised
What you're gotta do
You now don't believe
In Anything
That is said to you
Anymore
You gotta leave
You've gotta clean your head
Find your own
Polnt of view
IF you stay
Your gonna Pay
In way's you can't Conceive
THEY will say
Anything
For you
to stay
But the leash stays on
Until
your in your grave
But lately
I found the one that saves me
I found the one that explains me
And after all
This time
Passing by
IT was on my wall
Published 9th Dec 2024
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9th Dec 2024 10:02pm
When I read your poem, it made me think of a technique I have used a few times. I write from a feeling and then go back and respond poetically as if I were the person the feeling was aimed at. I loved the poem because there could be so many facets of it. Even a disgusted onlooker with their own issues. A trilogy.
10th Dec 2024 10:02am
