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Lover, Can I Wash Your Hair?
Tip your head back
Close your eyes
Leave your troubles
Between my thighs
Let your doubts be washed away
By my love for you today
Lover, I can’t help but show you
How the things you do
Make me want to shower you
It’s about to
Get all kinds of wet up in here
Close your eyes
Leave your troubles
Between my thighs
Let your doubts be washed away
By my love for you today
Lover, I can’t help but show you
How the things you do
Make me want to shower you
It’s about to
Get all kinds of wet up in here
Published 26th Nov 2024
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26th Nov 2024 6:47pm
For a minute Mary I thought yes it's an erotic piece but washing hair under the shower 😂anyways great stuff 🙃❤️
26th Nov 2024 11:34pm
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26th Nov 2024 7:31pm
I feel like washing someone's hair is an intimate way of getting close and personal with then. You know a way of spending quality time with them and washing away there troubles.
26th Nov 2024 11:35pm
27th Nov 2024 3:24am
I was lulled into false "awwwww"! And then those last two lines made my dirty mind perk all the way up!
Great piece!
Great piece!
27th Nov 2024 12:21pm
27th Nov 2024 1:36pm
A mix of love and lust, and the portrait of a loving couple, it is a delight.
27th Nov 2024 1:39pm
