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post coital
I can imagine laying there with you after fucking..
me still on top of you..
us both panting..
my sweat on both our skin..
our sex filling up the air with its sweet smell..
my dick still inside you shrinking down..
cause its so tired after filling you up so much..
and the cum dripping out of your cunt..
just laying there in that bliss..
holding each other and panting..
me still on top of you..
us both panting..
my sweat on both our skin..
our sex filling up the air with its sweet smell..
my dick still inside you shrinking down..
cause its so tired after filling you up so much..
and the cum dripping out of your cunt..
just laying there in that bliss..
holding each other and panting..
Published 25th Feb 2010
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Anonymous
26th Feb 2010 7:01am
and tender at the same time,made all the more painful by that brutal awareness of loss.
26th Feb 2010 12:05pm
i like that: "raunchy and tender" another way of describing the opposing forces I use in my work.. the pain of loss.. yes, brutal :(
Anonymous
26th Feb 2010 9:08pm
and, as Priya said, loss. Vulgar and moving all at once.
27th Feb 2010 3:48pm
thanks for the read jack.. I love mixing the opposing forces in my arts.. it fucks with your head you dont know whether to get sick or feel something in your heart..
