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Instincts kick
Oiled and slick
{Lust excess embed}
Amber smiles
Sweet rocket rides
{Your hunger has been fed}
Oiled and slick
{Lust excess embed}
Amber smiles
Sweet rocket rides
{Your hunger has been fed}
Published 22nd Nov 2024
| Edited 20th Dec 2024
Author's Note
69 Shades of Pete #7
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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23rd Nov 2024 1:32am
Hot blooded write, Pete. Into the list it belongs. You're a gifted writer my friend, enjoy your work. Appreciate you.
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23rd Nov 2024 8:25pm
To the point...direct...totally understood
hahaaa...great job Pete
Much respect
Naaj
hahaaa...great job Pete
Much respect
Naaj
23rd Nov 2024 10:19pm
24th Nov 2024 8:08am
It's nice to see something different: not centered, creative lay-out :-)
...not to mention this is one steamy piece of ink...
...not to mention this is one steamy piece of ink...
24th Nov 2024 9:18am
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