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If I Could Fall In Love For Just One Night
If I could fall in love for just one night
One night of passion
That could never be marred by the passing of time
One kiss the first kiss
The first taste of lips caress
Is always the sweetest
Time leads to disappointment
Even the sweetest fruit
Can rot upon the vine
There can be no scars
No bruises
When time has no time
If I could fall in love for just one night
One moment suspended outside time
If I could fall in love with you for just one night
I would love your memory forever
One night of passion
That could never be marred by the passing of time
One kiss the first kiss
The first taste of lips caress
Is always the sweetest
Time leads to disappointment
Even the sweetest fruit
Can rot upon the vine
There can be no scars
No bruises
When time has no time
If I could fall in love for just one night
One moment suspended outside time
If I could fall in love with you for just one night
I would love your memory forever
Published 20th May 2012
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20th May 2012 2:59pm
Very good poem, I can feel your sincerity. The thing is, in the line "I would love your memory forever" seems kind of sad, because you can only love the memory, not the person. I also think this poem kind of sounds like a one night stand, "just one night/ one night of passion." I kind of like it though, it sounds kind of like love at first sight then a hint of lust. Good job :D
28th May 2012 11:35am
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