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Evolutions
In a butcher and clockmaker tryst
their scion anon gave skills a twist
when gears put together
in slaughterhouse weather
made her a meaty...horologist.
their scion anon gave skills a twist
when gears put together
in slaughterhouse weather
made her a meaty...horologist.
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Re. Evolutions
17th Nov 2024 10:09pm
That was a very good limerick. Learned what that was, lol, as I don't have formal
training. Plus went to the dictionary for a couple words. I like learning.
You have great talent.
training. Plus went to the dictionary for a couple words. I like learning.
You have great talent.
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Re: Re. Evolutions
17th Nov 2024 10:50pm
Limericks are heaps of fun 😊
I've only done a couple so far but that's about all you can type into Bluesky to post, although you can post photos of poems too so I've got a couple of sonnets posted there as well.
Way glad you liked it 🙏
I've only done a couple so far but that's about all you can type into Bluesky to post, although you can post photos of poems too so I've got a couple of sonnets posted there as well.
Way glad you liked it 🙏
Re. Evolutions
17th Nov 2024 11:35pm
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18th Nov 2024 00:10am
I imagine it must be a lot like joke writing for a comedy show, but I've never done that before either.
Seems both will require extreme ideation condensation and juxtaposition, which is why they are so charming when well done.
Seems both will require extreme ideation condensation and juxtaposition, which is why they are so charming when well done.
Re. Evolutions
19th Nov 2024 4:07am
As a person who has taken a lot interest in horology lately, and a fan of limericks, this goes so well together.
Nicely done.
Nicely done.
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Re: Re. Evolutions
19th Nov 2024 5:52am
I wrote this down years ago, but then I misplaced it and finally gave up trying to find it, but I loved the concept enough that I reworked it from memory, and this is what I got.
I think it's even better but I can't say for sure since I don't perfectly remember the old one.
Live and learn ☘️
I think it's even better but I can't say for sure since I don't perfectly remember the old one.
Live and learn ☘️
Re. Evolutions
19th Nov 2024 8:50am
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