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My heart that cries

Rain hits the window
There's more water in my eyes
I long for your love
Vision_of_insanity
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Re. My heart that cries
(Debbie)
16th Nov 2024 10:44pm
Perfectly said.
deliabear
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Re: Re. My heart that cries
17th Nov 2024 00:39am
Happy to know you enjoyed these poems I wrote today. Thanks my friend.
Vision_of_insanity
Re. My heart that cries
17th Nov 2024 3:20pm

A beautiful piece! Once again you succeeded in expressing a deep topic in a few lines.
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Re: Re. My heart that cries
17th Nov 2024 3:33pm
Thank you my friend.
Vision_of_insanity
Re. My heart that cries
(Damian DeadLove)
18th Nov 2024 3:09am
Brilliantly written, Keith. Appreciate you.

DL  
DamianDeadLove
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Re: Re. My heart that cries
18th Nov 2024 10:20am
Appreciate that Damian.
Vision_of_insanity

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