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Another Problem Solved
How can I miss you?
When you never go away
Water’s wet sky is blue
Another victim falls prey
Outside in the distance
A stranger lies in wait
Steeped in persistence
Always guarding the gate
When did I get wise?
Is the proper question
As soon as a crow flies
It disregards suggestion
Across from the station
Where young lovers flirt
All over God’s creation
Someone’s slinging dirt
When did you sell it?
And why wasn’t I involved?
Shut up and take a hit
Another problem solved
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
When you never go away
Water’s wet sky is blue
Another victim falls prey
Outside in the distance
A stranger lies in wait
Steeped in persistence
Always guarding the gate
When did I get wise?
Is the proper question
As soon as a crow flies
It disregards suggestion
Across from the station
Where young lovers flirt
All over God’s creation
Someone’s slinging dirt
When did you sell it?
And why wasn’t I involved?
Shut up and take a hit
Another problem solved
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
Published 15th Nov 2024
| Edited Yesterday
Author's Note
Late night musing. Pretty straightforward little write, me thinks. Appreciate you.
- Damian DeadLove
"You don't want to talk
So baby, shut up
And let me drink the wine
From your fur tea cup
Velcro candy, sticky sweet
Makes my tattoos
Melt in the heat."
- Alice Cooper
- Damian DeadLove
"You don't want to talk
So baby, shut up
And let me drink the wine
From your fur tea cup
Velcro candy, sticky sweet
Makes my tattoos
Melt in the heat."
- Alice Cooper
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15th Nov 2024 8:53am
Yesterday 10:36am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, LDF. Honored to make your RL. Appreciate you.
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15th Nov 2024 10:16am
Really awesome writing here Damian
"As soon as a crow flies, It disregards suggestion". This line sold me. Powerful wording, reread this twice. Loved the thoughts & ideas you put into this piece.
"As soon as a crow flies, It disregards suggestion". This line sold me. Powerful wording, reread this twice. Loved the thoughts & ideas you put into this piece.
Yesterday 10:39am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. I loved that line as well. Glad you connected with the write. Appreciate you.
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15th Nov 2024 11:11am
Yesterday 10:40am
15th Nov 2024 11:51am
I never smoked the stuff but all my friends did. I realize it's a universal drug, I just never got into it.
Good writing, Damian.
Good writing, Damian.
Yesterday 10:44am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. It wasn't my thing for most of my life. But after I gave up alcohol, I needed something to calm me. I'm never hungover anymore. Appreciate you.
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15th Nov 2024 1:30pm
Nicely Done enjoy the flow of energy and determination to remain resilient in your thoughts ✍️👍🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
Yesterday 10:46am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, SHAMAN. Appreciate you.
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Yesterday 10:58pm
15th Nov 2024 2:00pm
Yesterday 10:49am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Pete. Appreciate you.
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15th Nov 2024 10:29pm
Yesterday 10:51am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. I'm glad you liked it. Appreciate you.
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Yesterday 11:34am
Someone once said that weed helps with editing ;-) It must help with creativity too.
...haven't tried it yet, but I love this piece, those last two lines are simply epic.
...haven't tried it yet, but I love this piece, those last two lines are simply epic.
Yesterday 10:47pm
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Duende. Yeah, somebody did say that. lol. I'm so glad you liked the write my friend. Appreciate you.
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