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1001 Thanks
Dear Vision-of-insanity!
When I read the first poem of your pen
I felt confused
A sober and merciles look at the world
Cruel but undeniably true
At the same time I was
Irresistibly drawn to your work
Every time I was active on DU, I visited
Your page and got lost in your poetry
Your writing style is brilliant
Awesome wording, rhythm and flow
Sarcastic sense of humor
Contribute to creating stunning poems
Every now and then you published
Bitter-sweet and heart-touching poetry
Showing a well balanced man
Rough shell, soft core
Now I understood my initial confusion
You challenged my unicorm- vision
This world isn't sugar and roses only
High time to leave the Ivory Tower!
Maybe one day I'll follow your example And write a poem about a guy who Prepares the last unicorn for the grill
Or something like that
1001 times thank you, Vision, for
Being a bubbling source of inspiration
And a helpful and supporting member
Of the DU Poetry family!
When I read the first poem of your pen
I felt confused
A sober and merciles look at the world
Cruel but undeniably true
At the same time I was
Irresistibly drawn to your work
Every time I was active on DU, I visited
Your page and got lost in your poetry
Your writing style is brilliant
Awesome wording, rhythm and flow
Sarcastic sense of humor
Contribute to creating stunning poems
Every now and then you published
Bitter-sweet and heart-touching poetry
Showing a well balanced man
Rough shell, soft core
Now I understood my initial confusion
You challenged my unicorm- vision
This world isn't sugar and roses only
High time to leave the Ivory Tower!
Maybe one day I'll follow your example And write a poem about a guy who Prepares the last unicorn for the grill
Or something like that
1001 times thank you, Vision, for
Being a bubbling source of inspiration
And a helpful and supporting member
Of the DU Poetry family!
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