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Empty Trees
The setting sun made the final clinging leaves
shine like dangling red jewels.
The scarlet shimmer infused my imagination
with creative fuel
Trees are not like people,
they don't feel empty.
Why do we grieve for that
which cannot be retrieved?
Barren branches know.
It's so much easier just to let go.
Creation always finds a way to grow.
shine like dangling red jewels.
The scarlet shimmer infused my imagination
with creative fuel
Trees are not like people,
they don't feel empty.
Why do we grieve for that
which cannot be retrieved?
Barren branches know.
It's so much easier just to let go.
Creation always finds a way to grow.
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Re. Empty Trees
9th Nov 2024 11:40pm
Debbie this is beautiful, and I love the picture it goes well with the poem;))
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9th Nov 2024 11:42pm
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10th Nov 2024 4:00am
Beautifully written, Debbie. Love the depth in this write. Appreciate you.
DL
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10th Nov 2024 1:52pm
I try to put some depth alongside the nature description.
Thank you & I appreciate your support. 😊
Thank you & I appreciate your support. 😊
Re. Empty Trees
10th Nov 2024 5:08am
Dear D,
I loved the perspective of this piece and for me, the message of letting go. There will be more beauty to behold with new beginnings. Lovely write. H🌷
I loved the perspective of this piece and for me, the message of letting go. There will be more beauty to behold with new beginnings. Lovely write. H🌷
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10th Nov 2024 1:56pm
It's natural for the trees to let go of their leaves. If only humans knew when to let go.
I agree about new beginnings. Thank you for lovely comments and for taking
your time to read. 🍁
I agree about new beginnings. Thank you for lovely comments and for taking
your time to read. 🍁
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10th Nov 2024 11:12am
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11th Nov 2024 1:53pm
I like the creativity, analogy, and morality behind this. The 3rd stanza is particularly strong, and you capture a philosophical concept through visual relativity. Overall, very well done. Thanks for sharing!
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11th Nov 2024 2:17pm