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Reality with no end
Always attached to her sadness
abandoned
loneliness was her best friend
forgotten by society
no one wanted to be her friend
abandoned in the corner of the silence
that is her life, every day
she hides her sorrow in a blade
In the silence of the darkness she wakes up alone again
a dream to never surrender,
a reality that has no end
abandoned
loneliness was her best friend
forgotten by society
no one wanted to be her friend
abandoned in the corner of the silence
that is her life, every day
she hides her sorrow in a blade
In the silence of the darkness she wakes up alone again
a dream to never surrender,
a reality that has no end
Written by
Vision_of_insanity
Published 9th Nov 2024
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Re: Re. Reality with no end
9th Nov 2024 11:09am
Re. Reality with no end
9th Nov 2024 12:38pm
This is Heart-wrenching and so well expressed. I think it's one of your very best works onto my R/L it goes!
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9th Nov 2024 2:57pm
Re. Reality with no end
9th Nov 2024 3:43pm
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9th Nov 2024 5:03pm
Re. Reality with no end
9th Nov 2024 6:02pm
This is really heart touching.
And thought provoking. Why are there so many people who don't see the sorrows and needs of their fellow humans? It could be so easy - loving kindness doesn't cost a thing, and additionally, when you give it to others it makes you happy!
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Re: Re. Reality with no end
9th Nov 2024 6:57pm
Hello Sappho,
Thank you. I agree. I'm happy you enjoyed this piece. People need to be there for one another. Not everyone is independent or self-sufficient. Thanks my friend.
Thank you. I agree. I'm happy you enjoyed this piece. People need to be there for one another. Not everyone is independent or self-sufficient. Thanks my friend.
Re. Reality with no end
10th Nov 2024 5:04am
Brilliantly written, Keith. Really pulls at the heartstrings. Appreciate you.
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Re: Re. Reality with no end
10th Nov 2024 11:03am
Thanks Damian. Appreciate the comments and for choosing this for poem of the month.
Re. Reality with no end
10th Nov 2024 5:16am
loneliness really gives relief or peace... N i am also its friend... very nice writing...
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Re: Re. Reality with no end
10th Nov 2024 11:03am
Re. Reality with no end
10th Nov 2024 5:59am
Well you need to stop. I'm too emotional right now. Shame on you for causing sadness
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Re: Re. Reality with no end
10th Nov 2024 11:04am
No apologies here. Read some of my uglier writes then. It will make you feel better
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10th Nov 2024 11:18am
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10th Nov 2024 11:21am
Re. Reality with no end
11th Nov 2024 8:13am
Hello Vision, how are you man.; good writing here, you got a good balance of darkness, hope, and reality, dig this man, dig it: Ed
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Re: Re. Reality with no end
11th Nov 2024 12:23pm
Hello deadwolf. I;m doing well. Hope your doing well. Thank you for the read & comments.