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All The Darkness Fades Into Light
what shall i compose about the darkness
when the truth is bright like the sun
and spend a life in reasonless sadness*
while i can rejoice in smiles and fun.
do i have to complain of my own stress
isn't it empathic to keep it unsaid ?!
In self resilience, stoic, i progress
To rebuild a broken bone instead
i have to burn in the bright sunshine
as the truth lights my abyssal depths
my innerness swallows the heart that pines
grieving; is never a spiritual wealth
i will light a candle, in my darkest room
chase away the shadows, and the glooms
delight in the rest, if there, any will be
focus deeply on sweet bits for my sanity
sugarcoat the worse of life's bitterness
make of my grief a paved way to happiness
accept what fate and destiny reserve for me
death is a stand, where to judge my humanity
when the truth is bright like the sun
and spend a life in reasonless sadness*
while i can rejoice in smiles and fun.
do i have to complain of my own stress
isn't it empathic to keep it unsaid ?!
In self resilience, stoic, i progress
To rebuild a broken bone instead
i have to burn in the bright sunshine
as the truth lights my abyssal depths
my innerness swallows the heart that pines
grieving; is never a spiritual wealth
i will light a candle, in my darkest room
chase away the shadows, and the glooms
delight in the rest, if there, any will be
focus deeply on sweet bits for my sanity
sugarcoat the worse of life's bitterness
make of my grief a paved way to happiness
accept what fate and destiny reserve for me
death is a stand, where to judge my humanity
Published 8th Nov 2024
| Edited 9th Nov 2024
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8th Nov 2024 6:40pm
Flawless my love and so tender in its relations to the human spirit, the softness expelled by the human heart, and the pampering caress to the intellect.
I do hope your Friday has been peaceful for you and may you have a spiritual weekend.
Love and Hugs, always,
SKC🌻
I do hope your Friday has been peaceful for you and may you have a spiritual weekend.
Love and Hugs, always,
SKC🌻
We do need human side to uplift us, in this world of woes, wars, and psychological misunderstanding, deaths strike everywhere, but wont ever make us raise the defeat flag, our spiritual force, and intellectual energy is our peaceful weapon against any sadness, any suffering may befall us.
Your presence is so much valued Sweet Kitty; have my salutations; the most respectful ones. Hamid's best wishes
Your presence is so much valued Sweet Kitty; have my salutations; the most respectful ones. Hamid's best wishes
8th Nov 2024 7:25pm
The more we know about darkness the more we get annoyed.. what is beyond our ability to change it is better to walk far away and try to survive insanity.. I think preserving what is left of our Light, Love, Beauty, Power, Endurance and Peace to ourselves.. high time we take back our lives just for ourselves stress and worry free.. at least we try to do so.. So deep and meaningful what you have displayed in your wonderful poetry! God bless you.
Darkness is everywhere ready to swallow our hopes, engulf the bright horizons we are expecting,; so we wont give it this privilege,
as we are optimistic poets looking forward to a bright future, and good vibes with our words, that uplift and give glimmers of hope to those dark, low spirited ones all around..
Thank Besma for your fine feedback, amazing analysis, and good critic as always been. Hamid best regards.
as we are optimistic poets looking forward to a bright future, and good vibes with our words, that uplift and give glimmers of hope to those dark, low spirited ones all around..
Thank Besma for your fine feedback, amazing analysis, and good critic as always been. Hamid best regards.
9th Nov 2024 12:21pm
Beautiful poem Hamid. There’s resilience to be found in moments of despair. The power of acceptance. The strength in vulnerability. Nice write :)
9th Nov 2024 12:44pm
Yes, no way to surrender to life and its downs, it has ups that holds our hands and stand us up again....we ,resilience not obedience to sadness
to despair , always looking forward to a bright day ..
Your words are so real ,so uplifting and strong, i can feel them,
Thank you for your sweet feedback; Evera, stay blessed.Hamid
to despair , always looking forward to a bright day ..
Your words are so real ,so uplifting and strong, i can feel them,
Thank you for your sweet feedback; Evera, stay blessed.Hamid
