Emphatic tongue

Very original, especially in the presentation of your vocabulary, and the words you rhyme.  A lot of detailed definition in what transpires hinges on your ability to use distinct language, which is a poetic style in its own right.  Also, what you convey is very dark, ominous, and foreboding, in a seemingly doubtful cycle of satire or cynicism against the observation and description you make about such accursed nature.  The way you transition through emotions from the standpoint of someone who sees such negative reinforcement of erroneous manipulation is solidi in expression.  Rationally, each line builds up to a depressing subjection in the end, be it 1st or 3rd person.  That's just some of what I pick up on here.  I know a lot of that is interpretation, semantics, and ambiguity, but how you build up to the end is solid, and your rhyming vocabulary is unique.  Anyway, good job.  Thanks for sharing.

Thank you Connotation. I appreciate how your comments dig deep and you are able to accurately convey what I try to get across. You should almost offer your translations of peoples writing as a service. Thanks again for your feedback :)