Sweet Release

All too true in what regulates much behavior.  Whether a happy marriage behind closed doors, or after a night out on the town, such is a key factor of motive and intent to fulfill.  If only adulthood desires could be less problematic in causing drama, heh.  It can be easy to wax metaphorically upon such adage, and the language here is apparently so.  Great job of exploring another style or spectrum, as a writer.  You seem to do well, no matter the topic.  Thanks for sharing!

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it makes life better

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The temperature was running high with this poem. Hot, sexy and naughty. Nice work Damian.

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Beautifully written Damian and imagery ❤️

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Well for someone who is not used to writing this you did well 👏 Sexy

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You should have seen the smile on my face when I saw you released an erotic piece :-)
Getting out of your comfort zone, exploring other genres, isn't easy, but you did it anyway.

Even though it's not your wheelhouse, you did a Great job. Love this piece, Damian.

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Nicely Done 👍✅ thanks for sharing your thoughts 🪬 SHAMAN 🪬✍️

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Respect Brother Poet ✍️

An enjoyable to read foray into erotic poetry. You did well here. The picture leaves the reader in no doubt the sweet release the couple are seeking:

Entangled bodies achieving sweet release

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Awwww
this is the very  first time i read something sensual on your page...very nice :) keep writing

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