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Limerence

here I go again
fingers brushing candle flame
beauty - danger - dance

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Written by brokentitanium

(k.)

Published 3rd Nov 2024

#love #senryu #ThrillSeeking

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Re. Limerence

Her

3rd Nov 2024 11:23am

So sexy and beautiful, k
Plus I learned a new word.

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brokentitanium (k.)

3rd Nov 2024 9:30pm

Thank you! A relatively new word for me too... and explains so, SO much!!
❤️k

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PoetSpeak

3rd Nov 2024 1:07pm

Daredevil

Like 👍

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brokentitanium (k.)

3rd Nov 2024 9:31pm

I'm also a fool, but I like your description better!
❤️k

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Re. Limerence

Honoria

3rd Nov 2024 7:02pm

Dear BK,

Living on the edge. I can dig it. Enjoy😘
Fab write. H🌷

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brokentitanium (k.)

3rd Nov 2024 9:32pm

Thank you! Keeping the burns to a minimum. 😉
❤️k

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WillowsWhimsies

4th Nov 2024 10:20pm

The edge is more exciting. The view is so much better

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brokentitanium (k.)

5th Nov 2024 3:21am

True! Thank you for stopping by. 😊
❤️k

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Re. Limerence

wallyroo92

9th Nov 2024 7:34pm

The opening line feels so daring and yet reassuring, knowing you'll be ok, somehow, someway.
Nicely done.

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brokentitanium (k.)

9th Nov 2024 11:22pm

It's familiar territory!
Many thanks
❤️k

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