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I light my beer
crack open a cigarette
put the salad on the braai
then toss the meat
I will sit on the radio
and turn on the couch
I'm living my death
until my untimely life
I sing the news
and watch the blues
letting off some cool
and keeping my steam
I'm just living my death
until my untimely
LIFE
crack open a cigarette
put the salad on the braai
then toss the meat
I will sit on the radio
and turn on the couch
I'm living my death
until my untimely life
I sing the news
and watch the blues
letting off some cool
and keeping my steam
I'm just living my death
until my untimely
LIFE
Published 18th May 2012
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18th May 2012 9:14pm
I feel like I've read something to this effect before. Was this previously published?
19th May 2012 10:39am
22nd May 2012 4:08am
Well either way, I like how it tastes. Nice and light, with just a touch of afterthought.
21st May 2012 2:18pm
"I'm living my death"
Or "life is killing me"
Surreal sense of humor with a hint of bitter aftertaste.
Or "life is killing me"
Surreal sense of humor with a hint of bitter aftertaste.
10th Jul 2012 7:42am
