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Jam Jar
Get me out of this jam jar!
I don't even know how I entered
I had some waffles at a restaurant
Now I have colon cancer
Get me out!
It's a disaster
I was dancing on the table
When I fell into some marmalade
Now I lay on the bed that karma made
I'm afraid I might be stuck here forever
Get me out of this jam jar!
Get me out!
It's a disaster
I don't even know how I entered
I had some waffles at a restaurant
Now I have colon cancer
Get me out!
It's a disaster
I was dancing on the table
When I fell into some marmalade
Now I lay on the bed that karma made
I'm afraid I might be stuck here forever
Get me out of this jam jar!
Get me out!
It's a disaster
Published 20th May 2012
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21st May 2012 1:37pm
This poem is amazing.
I was truly impressed by your ability to convey so much with a few verses.
Acid Poetry with avant-garde images.
I was truly impressed by your ability to convey so much with a few verses.
Acid Poetry with avant-garde images.
5th Jun 2012 5:40pm
7th Jun 2012 5:00pm
no dude.I really appreciate the feedback.I hardly get comments so I never know what to say to them(sometimes the ones that matter).I'm flattered that you even added this piece to your reading list.
