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Her Warmest Embrace
Spilling ink just to get through the night
Distorted thoughts rising to the surface
Sweetest muse marks me with her bite
Bringing desire and stoking my furnace
Sharing visions that bring a truthful urge
Wading in darkness while walking upright
Not knowing which version will emerge
Covered with shadows or bathing in light
She resides within my active imagination
Undressing wisdom with seductive grace
She leaves reason open to interpretation
Unlocking me with her warmest embrace
Distorted thoughts rising to the surface
Sweetest muse marks me with her bite
Bringing desire and stoking my furnace
Sharing visions that bring a truthful urge
Wading in darkness while walking upright
Not knowing which version will emerge
Covered with shadows or bathing in light
She resides within my active imagination
Undressing wisdom with seductive grace
She leaves reason open to interpretation
Unlocking me with her warmest embrace
Published 27th Oct 2024
Author's Note
Late night musing. I'm getting brave now I guess. This is kinda addictive. I can't believe I made my muse a woman. Yes I can believe it this write is a receipt. Appreciate you.
- Damian DeadLove
"Where is my love life?
Tell me, tell me
Where has it gone?
Somebody please please tell me what the hell is wrong"
- Prince
- Damian DeadLove
"Where is my love life?
Tell me, tell me
Where has it gone?
Somebody please please tell me what the hell is wrong"
- Prince
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27th Oct 2024 8:24am
28th Oct 2024 2:24am
27th Oct 2024 9:03am
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27th Oct 2024 9:09am
28th Oct 2024 2:26am
27th Oct 2024 10:41am
28th Oct 2024 2:27am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
27th Oct 2024 11:32am
28th Oct 2024 2:30am
No she will not be denied, for sure. Thanks for reading, Fia. Honored to make your RL. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
27th Oct 2024 12:59pm
28th Oct 2024 2:31am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Dreamz. Honored to make your RL. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
27th Oct 2024 7:41pm
Why can't you believe it? Women have been muses for an eternity! Not just to poets, but painters and sculptures. Even architecture, i.e. - Taj Mahal.
It's a lovely write and indicative of a soft surrender.
It's a lovely write and indicative of a soft surrender.
28th Oct 2024 2:35am
I can believe it. It's just their muses were probably real women. Mine is in my head. lol. Thanks for reading and your continued support, Tams. Honored to make your RL. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
28th Oct 2024 9:31pm
The muse is very unique in that it creates itself, then stuffs their inspiration in our heads when we're not looking. The biggest inspiration of all...life. much enjoyed this one! Personally I have multiple muses
29th Oct 2024 1:34am
Thanks for reading and your kind words, Willow. That makes sense to me. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
1st Nov 2024 4:09am
This is exceptional. I really like the 2nd and 3rd stanzas, and the, what I'll call, double entendre that you bring to life in the entirety of this piece. You leave a lot open to interpretation, as does writing on such a topic. Is it erotic, is it relationship morality? Heh, great job of balancing a sort of PG rated theme when you could've easily gone XXX. The shadows/light part was great. The consensus that women bring out the best in their men really is true. I can sense some of that here. Overall, again, great job. I enjoyed the read.
1st Nov 2024 4:53am
Thanks so much for reading and your commentary, brother. I'm really glad you liked the write. Nice catch, the double entendre was done on purpose. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
1st Nov 2024 4:57am
