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Bye Bye

I'm leaving this site
Got not much to say
Unless someone out there
Wants me to stay

Now that I have your attention.

I've loved reading the words from the women on here, especially those attracted or trapped by BDSM.
The dynamics of a Dom/Sub entanglement confounds me.From where I sit, on my back deck, all I see is each Master using their Subs power to disguise their own weakness, to feed their own pleasure, their gigantic egos.

I'm sure some Subs and Doms will argue differently and I expect them to defend their positions vigorously as any zealot would.


For me the BDSM communion leaves little room for love (whatever that means) and love if any seems to be more from the female side and always leaves them vulnerable, which predators sense and use  to lock them in, use them ,then discard them.At least,that's how I read those poems which seem more like laments to me.

I've found myself posting here more often than I'd intended and discovered that I'm writing now , not for the joy of writing or to discover the truth, but for affirmation from fellow contributors

I've got nothing left to say
So I bid you good day  
Unless one of you writers
Still need me to stay.

Have I become a Dom that needs you to beg?
Written by backdeckbenny
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Author's Note
I'd love to meet you all one day at the same time.What a concentration of differences that would be.Souls would be opened and wounds healed.....bye bye
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