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Humble Me
I don’t lack ego in life
I’m stop short of conceited
In quest after Miss Poetry
in the World the same not repeated
Recluse adolescent shy cub
raised best as could by young mother
Never taught to be king
so chose a player thru struggle
Reluctant confidence self assured
Ripley believing or not
I made myself into the vintage Man I raised
chiseled in slow mastery thought
No virtuous grandeur where I stood
pebbles can’t pass before shame
Maybe was meek when I was formed
now word gets born from my name
Onto discover flight in esteem sand views
overseeing wordplay routines
Life couldn’t humble me so easy
so the Lord dissolved arrogant things
I can’t sight one direction
so I scribe one handed upwards of fore
Kobe Bryan practice rounds
is how the drive became more
Iconic pineal panoramic roads spin
settling birds eye emotional pages to table
Mission accomplished at sign of quill release
now I reverse what I’m label
Captured in provoked tongue tied phrases
held hostage at stroke of a thumb
Chose to be genuine in architect bound by design
is where thought originates from
I’m stop short of conceited
In quest after Miss Poetry
in the World the same not repeated
Recluse adolescent shy cub
raised best as could by young mother
Never taught to be king
so chose a player thru struggle
Reluctant confidence self assured
Ripley believing or not
I made myself into the vintage Man I raised
chiseled in slow mastery thought
No virtuous grandeur where I stood
pebbles can’t pass before shame
Maybe was meek when I was formed
now word gets born from my name
Onto discover flight in esteem sand views
overseeing wordplay routines
Life couldn’t humble me so easy
so the Lord dissolved arrogant things
I can’t sight one direction
so I scribe one handed upwards of fore
Kobe Bryan practice rounds
is how the drive became more
Iconic pineal panoramic roads spin
settling birds eye emotional pages to table
Mission accomplished at sign of quill release
now I reverse what I’m label
Captured in provoked tongue tied phrases
held hostage at stroke of a thumb
Chose to be genuine in architect bound by design
is where thought originates from
Published 24th Oct 2024
| Edited 13th Dec 2024
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The author encourages honest critique.
10th Nov 2024 6:07am
You are a good person. Never forget that. But good people have to dodge bullets just like everyone else.
10th Nov 2024 9:20pm
Before Mr. Anderson became Neo and out-stretched his destiny, consider me the latter while consciously and genuinely both. Thanks for everything.
11th Nov 2024 7:46am
15th Nov 2024 11:43pm
So this is what I'm up against, real poetry with honest sharing, self assessment and earned pride, written of in frivolous flaunts containing many syllabled words spelled out in unique and interesting arrangements, no problem;)
16th Nov 2024 3:04am
Yeah but it’s not my most stellar pairing a better one honestly would be Miss understood, or The Ultimate Cure. They have more trapdoors and alternate meanings thru puns and knowledge. So count yourself lucky. I also do guest appearances if you wanted to spar. You’d definitely win against Humble Me. 🏆
18th Nov 2024 7:37pm
I'll look into those, we could do something, it's a little tough for me to get to the internet these days but I'd try something
18th Nov 2024 8:52pm
Sounds good, respectfully.
I’m also open to friendly collab, anything that sharpens my steel against steel for prosperity.
I write in different genres I’m open to learning others, assimilating styles anything that challenges my skill I mean my quill.
I’m also open to friendly collab, anything that sharpens my steel against steel for prosperity.
I write in different genres I’m open to learning others, assimilating styles anything that challenges my skill I mean my quill.
