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the blue of his shirt
the blue
of his
shirt
matched
the color
of the
ocean's
hands,
watching
the wind
fill
his sails,
he floated
on the
waters
like
an empty
shell,
he was
pushed
further out
before
he was
swallowed
up.
of his
shirt
matched
the color
of the
ocean's
hands,
watching
the wind
fill
his sails,
he floated
on the
waters
like
an empty
shell,
he was
pushed
further out
before
he was
swallowed
up.
Published 22nd Oct 2024
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22nd Oct 2024 4:58am
Beautifully written, Jimmy. Into the list it belongs. Also in your last stanza you have "pusher" I assume you mean pushed.. Appreciate you .
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