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I'll bring you stories,
of the one heart beating,
an end to thumping,
then the one dying,
the burial of daffodils,
and all of the roses,
story of sorrow,
the one of tomorrow......
of the one heart beating,
an end to thumping,
then the one dying,
the burial of daffodils,
and all of the roses,
story of sorrow,
the one of tomorrow......
Published 21st Oct 2024
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22nd Oct 2024 6:38pm
22nd Oct 2024 11:32pm
This was my most popular poem on AllPoetry. It got on the front page and got over 3000 views and about 120 likes and many comments. Some poets loved it while others said it reminded them that death was coming so made them miserable. To be honest, I never really felt this until its popularity. So I read it about 3 more times and began to understand why it resonated with so many.
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