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A seagull’s view
I flew
My wings spread out wide
I was above the rushing tides
Light
As a feather
The weather
A perfect mix
Of sunshine and mist
I saw a bottle of wine
The sun shined
It was a fine day
Then I jump awake
My wings spread out wide
I was above the rushing tides
Light
As a feather
The weather
A perfect mix
Of sunshine and mist
I saw a bottle of wine
The sun shined
It was a fine day
Then I jump awake
Published 21st Oct 2024
Author's Note
I thought of what I’d see if I was a seagull
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21st Oct 2024 5:12am
Dear W,
I enjoyed your seagull vision. The sea hold such wonderful ability to lift the spirit and you’ve captured that beautifully. H🌷
I enjoyed your seagull vision. The sea hold such wonderful ability to lift the spirit and you’ve captured that beautifully. H🌷
21st Oct 2024 5:19am
Anonymous
21st Oct 2024 6:22pm
The wordplay here is excellent. Your style of poetry is a relaxing, weightless breeze of positivity. I like it.
21st Oct 2024 6:38pm
