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pale gold daisies
pale gold
daisies
lay on
the
counter,
my hand
stroking
their stems,
slowly
breathing
i keep
dozing off,
and they
are on
my mind,
i lay
down
beside
you, what
would it
have meant
if i
would
have left
them in
the garden.
daisies
lay on
the
counter,
my hand
stroking
their stems,
slowly
breathing
i keep
dozing off,
and they
are on
my mind,
i lay
down
beside
you, what
would it
have meant
if i
would
have left
them in
the garden.
Published 21st Oct 2024
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21st Oct 2024 5:04am
Dear J,
Awesome. The imagery of the daisies, which are my faves, with the contemplation of their fate if left alone…very cool piece! H🌷
Awesome. The imagery of the daisies, which are my faves, with the contemplation of their fate if left alone…very cool piece! H🌷
21st Oct 2024 5:14am
