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A Novice of Metaphors
A novice effort of metaphors as the ink dries in my
mind's reservoir attempting to describe the pale
clouds in your eyes frozen in time as I witness
a crooked smile reading the fog from your lips
as you inch closer to Perpetual Night listening to
silence of my muse failing to cast words to me
Breathlessly is cremation without a notary as
echo calls rising from the earth with Condor
wings with much madness and more sin
the mimes of fools begin to shout a motley
drama, of nevermore as the ink dries in my
reservoir
mind's reservoir attempting to describe the pale
clouds in your eyes frozen in time as I witness
a crooked smile reading the fog from your lips
as you inch closer to Perpetual Night listening to
silence of my muse failing to cast words to me
Breathlessly is cremation without a notary as
echo calls rising from the earth with Condor
wings with much madness and more sin
the mimes of fools begin to shout a motley
drama, of nevermore as the ink dries in my
reservoir
Published 21st Oct 2024
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21st Oct 2024 2:16am
good evening dearest Adagio I really enjoyed this ❤️ it might just be my mood but I've read some excellent poems tonight yours being one of them....
21st Oct 2024 2:19am
Well, I sure appreciate that. I feel as if my words are slipping in the wrong direction but maybe it, is too much caffeine.
21st Oct 2024 2:21am
how so I didn't think so I think we go where we are lead at any given moment often on simiar wavelengths abling us to connect with each other...
21st Oct 2024 2:24am
21st Oct 2024 2:26am
ah cat society they will handle it among themselves...I am often tempted to intefere but they have their way...
21st Oct 2024 2:28am
