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her eyes

her eyes

her dark eyes watched me
with a disapproving smile,
i felt so wrong.

Written by goodwolf1966

(jimmy)

Published 20th Oct 2024

#disappointment #rejection #sadness #shame

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Re. her eyes

21st Oct 2024 2:43am

Great write, Jimmy. Appreciate you.

DL

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21st Oct 2024 2:51am

thank you Damian

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