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The Still
The stream was cast a
severe steel blue.
Notions of heaven
feel true.
Behold the long smooth cascade
of waterfall.
The euphoric fluid showering
down my inner walls.
The surround was populated
by burnt orange and lemon leaves.
My spirit adopts a stature of peace.
Deemed a startling secret place.
Feel the still of the human race
severe steel blue.
Notions of heaven
feel true.
Behold the long smooth cascade
of waterfall.
The euphoric fluid showering
down my inner walls.
The surround was populated
by burnt orange and lemon leaves.
My spirit adopts a stature of peace.
Deemed a startling secret place.
Feel the still of the human race
Published 19th Oct 2024
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19th Oct 2024 3:32pm
Another classic, atmospheric piece. Two for today!! Nice! Lovin these poems. Images are hypnotic.
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19th Oct 2024 8:15pm
The peace a waterfall can bring to the heart is almost spiritual. I'm sure if you brought some inner-city kids out to see one they would become humbled. When I was young I saw one and could never figure out how the water just kept going without stopping. :)
I can't help but think of the songs 'Waterfall' and 'One Summer Dream' from Electric Light Orchestra.
Great picture and poem here.
I can't help but think of the songs 'Waterfall' and 'One Summer Dream' from Electric Light Orchestra.
Great picture and poem here.
19th Oct 2024 8:42pm
So very true. I wondered how the water kept flowing too.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts and for stopping bye.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts and for stopping bye.
20th Oct 2024 3:28am
Beautifully written, Debbie. Such stellar imagery. Into the list it belongs. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
20th Oct 2024 3:58am
20th Oct 2024 6:32pm
I saw you sitting there soaking it all in.
This is lovely, girl.
I want this tranquility for you 24/7💕
This is lovely, girl.
I want this tranquility for you 24/7💕
20th Oct 2024 7:41pm
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