Autumn Ecstasy

Your last line is something only a poet would think of. Nature can speak through images that hold our attention as good as an orator. I assume the words came after seeing the picture. Your interpretation is excellent. Great poem.

That is so nice of you to say, thank you. Yes I was inspired by the picture
Thx for checking out. 😊

Beautiful Debbie. This poem captures the feeling of autumn perfectly. Marvelous my friend.

You are too kind, but I'll take it, lol
Thank you very much 😊

Beautifully written, Debbie. Once again wonderful imagery. Appreciate you.

DL

Thanks so much!

“Liquid ecstasy”
That made me want to be in that stream (no, not for the reason you think).
The imagery in your poetry puts me right there.
Thank you.

Aww. That's sweet, thank you! 💜

You're welcome :)

I really like the "feel" you put into this.  The depiction brings many elements (senses) to life, that seemingly remind me of a stream in a forest somewhere far off.  I like the touch of "alien green glow" - seems to capture a mystical adage.  The shifting of context in the trees, reminding of winter to come, from their glimmering reflection in the water, is also pretty clever in how you choose to take transition.  I love the sound of running water, as it seems to alleviate stress and anxiety, so this is right up my alley, heh.  Also, the way you tied in the "life" of the leaves at the end, in their "death", is kind of ironic, and brings forth the familiar aesthetic of harvest time (at least to me.)  All in all, a very imaginative, lucid, vivid poem you got going here.  Thanks for sharing!

I always re-read the poem after your critique. I almost view it with brand new eyes.
I loved hearing your thoughts, thank you so much!

You're welcome.  You do very well in bringing elucidation and vivid visualization to life in your poems.